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  • Tootsie 3:33 am on December 16, 2010 Permalink | Reply
    Tags: , Poets Rally, , thaw   

    Thaw 


    The way he says my name

    Makes me smile

    Makes my emotions inflame

     

    The way he shows he care

    Makes me have hope

    That I can be repaired

     

    The way he compliments my every flaw

    Makes me want to dive right into his arms

    And thaw

     

    Thaw, the coldness around my heart

    That no one has ever attained

    It requires some kind of art

    Some kind of persistence

    It takes his good heart

     

    This is my entry for Thursday Poets Rally Week 35

     
    • Carol Ann Hoel 3:40 am on December 16, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Thawing of the heart – beautiful verses, Tootsie. Thank you for sharing…

    • Scent of my heart 4:04 pm on December 16, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Sweet, nice Rally entry! Keep writing! Thanks for visiting me!

      • Tootsie 4:23 am on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

        TY, I will keep writing! No problem, I love your work

    • thoughtsnotlost 5:06 pm on December 16, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      So beautiful, what a great read!

    • Olivia 5:53 pm on December 16, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Good that it’s working out for you.. πŸ™‚
      Get snug My Dear..

      Love xox

    • iBeingMe 2:38 am on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      nice one

    • Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved 2:22 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Welcome to Potluck, Toosie. Nice entry.

      I hope you are enjoying your visits and vistors. πŸ™‚

      • Tootsie 3:21 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

        Thanks.
        I am πŸ™‚ Hope you enjoy them as well.

    • Jingle 2:26 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      got your link finally,
      this is sweet and stunning piece.
      well done…

      Thanks for the outstanding contribution.
      Cheers!

      • Tootsie 3:21 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

        Thank you.
        Thanks for all of your hard work-very much appreciated πŸ™‚

    • booguloo 3:06 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Someone who can put this kind of work together is anything but broken. ..smiles..

    • Tootsie 3:22 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Thank you for your kind words πŸ™‚

    • dan 5:30 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Not only are you repaired, but better than ever. Your heart if full of love. Happy rally.

    • Darlene 5:40 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      enjoyed, hope you continue onward with your poetry writing

      • Tootsie 5:50 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

        Glad you enjoyed! I certainly will continue writing πŸ™‚

    • athursdayschild has a long way to go and much to be thankful for. 6:14 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      I think my own husband was sent to help me repair. Nice poem.

    • Tootsie 6:45 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      How sweet ❀

    • Sumit Sarkar 9:50 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      I love your poetry..

      “The way he compliments my every flaw
      Makes me want to dive right into his arms
      And thaw”

      Nice work πŸ™‚

    • Papo 11:02 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      glad to see persistence being key, to thawing your heart free..

    • Marlee-I Mystic 11:30 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      I know this feeling all too well. What a wonderful sentiment

    • Vishwas Anand 2:14 pm on December 18, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Wonderful depiction:)

    • Glory 3:51 pm on December 18, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      beautiful flow.

    • lnfiniterainbow 2:06 am on December 19, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Icicle heart
      Seek Healing Path πŸ™‚

      Rique’

    • introspeak 8:58 am on December 19, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Hey Tootsie, Thanks for stopping by my blog.
      You write so well. Ah, someone who compliments your every flaw; What a nice feeling it is. Reading it makes me want to go find that lady who can make me forget all my flaws when she jumps into my arms πŸ™‚

    • SeaGlass 1:13 pm on December 19, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      There’s a lot being said here, and it’s a brave move to share poetry with other people. What I’d suggest is concentrating on really distilling what you’re saying and trying to work out why your experience of these feelings or emotions is unique to you- why, in effect, is your experience special or different? The goal in poetry should be to reveal something new about human experience. You might consider looking at this subject from the perspective of someone completely different from yourself- someone of the opposite sex, a different cultural background, a different species, even! It’s worth experimenting a little and finding something new and unique to tell other people. Good luck and happy writing!

    • Roy Smith 2:16 pm on December 19, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      sweet and nicely written

    • dasuntoucha 12:04 am on December 20, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Touching words...felt.

    • lmcgregor 8:41 pm on December 20, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Fanatastic, Liked the rhyming pattern as well

    • Leo (Leonnyes) 2:13 pm on December 22, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      awesome. one guy worth meeting, eh Tootsie? cool.

    • gracefulglider 6:46 pm on December 23, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      i like the simplicity in this piece…. touching!

    • meirozavian 3:57 pm on December 24, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      So…so Nice. Love it !!

    • meirozavian 5:26 am on December 27, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Lovely.

      Happy new year!!

    • Tootsie 4:11 pm on December 27, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Thank you everyone for your kind words..IT REALLY MEANS A LOT πŸ™‚ hope you all had an awesome christmas and I will be updating as soon as I get on my comp πŸ™‚

    • megzone 3:41 pm on January 14, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      whooaaa…!!! i simply love this poem πŸ˜€
      its just brilliant πŸ˜€
      the last para simply takes the cake πŸ˜€

      here from Jingle’s Rally.. You can find my poem at
      http://megzone.wordpress.com/2011/01/12/i-dance/

    • Jingle 12:25 am on January 15, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      How are you?

      Want to make more poetic friends? You have to become a participant and stay active with fellow poets. Join Us Now, it is free and fun!

      Please leave your link under my agreement post when you are ready…Poetry Awards are assigned upon completion…Hope to see you in…

      Your poetry rocks!
      Keep Writing, Happy 2011!
      xx

      let me know if you wish to take the perfect poet award for week 36, and enter for week 37 poets rally.
      best regards.

    • lunawitch15 9:58 pm on February 21, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      I finally got a chance to read some of yours back.
      πŸ™‚
      They are awesome!

    • D 6:25 am on June 10, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      God gave u a gift with poetry and no one can ever change that, you should post more poems we miss you.

    • Tootsie 7:20 pm on June 30, 2011 Permalink | Reply

      ❀

  • Tootsie 1:33 pm on December 4, 2010 Permalink | Reply
    Tags: Jingle, Jingle Poets Rally, Perfect poet award, Poets Rally   

    Perfect poet award winner- week 34 I hum… 


    Perfect poet award winner- week 34

    I humbly accept the award! Thank you, Jingle
    I nominate http://thejuliebook.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/heroine/

     

    Some things- I just need to walk away from

    From your laughter

    Your critiques

    Your choking hold

     

    I need to break free from this oppression,

    Run away as fast as I can

     

    But somehow you always follow me,

    Stalking me like prey

     

    Without warning

    Without much purpose

    I’m just easy game

     

     

     

     

     

     
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