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  • Tootsie 2:06 am on December 14, 2010 Permalink | Reply
    Tags: Jingle Poetry, , therapy,   

    Poetry potluck wk 14- Writing 


    I write to set free emotions

    To remember the tears

    And to somehow forget the commotions

     

    Writing is my therapy, my sanity

    The words that come out of me have a yearning to live

    They have their own vanity

     

    These words come to life

    As soon as they hit the air

    Cutting through like a knife

     

    These words are me

    Who I am

    They are merely the debris of my heart

     

    Jingle Poetry

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  • Tootsie 11:14 pm on December 6, 2010 Permalink | Reply
    Tags: Dreams, Jingle Poetry,   

    Potluck week 13- Escape 


    In my dream

    Life is sweet

    Sweet as this butterscotch ice cream

    People are eccentric just like me

    Not hypocrites or judgmental

    Going about their life carefree

    There is laughter

    There isΒ  love

    Nothing looks bad hereafter

    I wish I could live in my dreams

    Today, Tonight, Tomorrow

    I’m tired of the same regimes

    I need an escape from this place

    I need an escape to survive

    I want to live in my dreams, where I can decide the pace

    Where I can change it all in an instant

    Let’s escape to this imaginary place

    My dreams

     

    This is my entry for the Potluck week 13 on Jingle Poetry

     
    • askcherlock 12:53 am on December 7, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Awesome! This sounds like the perfect escape. Maybe we can share your dreams….

    • Tootsie 12:59 am on December 7, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      That would be great πŸ™‚

    • Becky 4:46 am on December 7, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      I find my daydreams a comforting and wonderful place for the exact same reasons. If I did not have an imagination, I would not have survived this life of mine.

    • KB 5:47 am on December 7, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Sounds wonderful.

    • WordsWorthMillions 3:55 pm on December 7, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Aw… Beautiful dream. I will go with you. πŸ™‚
      ‘Sweet as this butterscotch ice cream’ Liked this simile. There is a touch of childlike and innocent.

    • fiveloaf 7:11 pm on December 7, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      very dreamy and sweet! mine’s here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/

    • Jingle 7:12 pm on December 7, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      I wish I could live in my dreams

      Today, Tonight, Tomorrow

      I’m tired of the same regimes

      me feel the same, well done, Glad to see you shine at JP…

      A+

    • Curtis Honeycutt 1:30 am on December 8, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      Sign me up…reminds me a bit of the ideal world John Lennon sings about in “Imagine”.

    • Serene 3:40 am on December 8, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      I wish I could live in my dreams too. We are very similar, you and me. My dreams are perfect. He is perfect in them. My family is perfect in them. Life as we know it, is perfect. I too want to live in my dreams forever.

      Thanks for this post. It put a smile on my face and reminded of the beautiful dreams I have too.

      Serene~

      • Tootsie 3:46 am on December 8, 2010 Permalink | Reply

        The more I read your posts, the more similarities I see. I’m glad it made you smile πŸ™‚

    • carlos zayas 2:08 pm on December 8, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      hi it’s so beautiful thanks sister

    • gracefulglider 8:36 am on December 10, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      ‘people are eccentric just like me’ i totally digg that line. i love this poem!

    • Alethea 4:58 pm on December 10, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      I know what you mean…I feel the same quite often.
      Beautifully expressed!!

    • Talon 12:01 am on December 11, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      I enjoyed this so much. The dream world can so often feel so much finer than the day-to-day one and you captured that feeling perfectly.

      My potluck: so maybe

      • Tootsie 12:04 am on December 14, 2010 Permalink | Reply

        Thanks. I will check urs out right now πŸ™‚

    • Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved 2:26 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      You have company on this one … Well considered …

    • Tootsie 3:31 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink | Reply

      πŸ™‚

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