Thaw
The way he says my name
Makes me smile
Makes my emotions inflame
The way he shows he care
Makes me have hope
That I can be repaired
The way he compliments my every flaw
Makes me want to dive right into his arms
And thaw
Thaw, the coldness around my heart
That no one has ever attained
It requires some kind of art
Some kind of persistence
It takes his good heart
This is my entry for Thursday Poets Rally Week 35
D, 
Carol Ann Hoel 3:40 am on December 16, 2010 Permalink |
Thawing of the heart – beautiful verses, Tootsie. Thank you for sharing…
Tootsie 3:51 am on December 16, 2010 Permalink |
I am glad you liked
askcherlock 8:40 am on December 20, 2010 Permalink |
So sweetly loving. I just adored this!
Scent of my heart 4:04 pm on December 16, 2010 Permalink |
Sweet, nice Rally entry! Keep writing! Thanks for visiting me!
Tootsie 4:23 am on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
TY, I will keep writing! No problem, I love your work
thoughtsnotlost 5:06 pm on December 16, 2010 Permalink |
So beautiful, what a great read!
Tootsie 4:24 am on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Thank you so much
Olivia 5:53 pm on December 16, 2010 Permalink |
Good that it’s working out for you..
Get snug My Dear..
Love xox
Tootsie 4:24 am on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
iBeingMe 2:38 am on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
nice one
Tootsie 4:25 am on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Thanks
Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved 2:22 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Welcome to Potluck, Toosie. Nice entry.
I hope you are enjoying your visits and vistors.
Tootsie 3:21 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Thanks.
Hope you enjoy them as well.
I am
Thursday Poets Rally Week 35 (December 16-22) | Jingle 2:23 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
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Jingle 2:26 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
got your link finally,
this is sweet and stunning piece.
well done…
Thanks for the outstanding contribution.
Cheers!
Tootsie 3:21 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Thank you.
Thanks for all of your hard work-very much appreciated
booguloo 3:06 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Someone who can put this kind of work together is anything but broken. ..smiles..
Tootsie 3:22 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Thank you for your kind words
dan 5:30 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Not only are you repaired, but better than ever. Your heart if full of love. Happy rally.
Tootsie 5:39 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Thank You!!
Darlene 5:40 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
enjoyed, hope you continue onward with your poetry writing
Tootsie 5:50 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
Glad you enjoyed! I certainly will continue writing
athursdayschild has a long way to go and much to be thankful for. 6:14 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
I think my own husband was sent to help me repair. Nice poem.
Tootsie 6:45 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
How sweet <3
Sumit Sarkar 9:50 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
I love your poetry..
“The way he compliments my every flaw
Makes me want to dive right into his arms
And thaw”
Nice work
Papo 11:02 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
glad to see persistence being key, to thawing your heart free..
Marlee-I Mystic 11:30 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
I know this feeling all too well. What a wonderful sentiment
Vishwas Anand 2:14 pm on December 18, 2010 Permalink |
Wonderful depiction:)
Glory 3:51 pm on December 18, 2010 Permalink |
beautiful flow.
lnfiniterainbow 2:06 am on December 19, 2010 Permalink |
Icicle heart
Seek Healing Path
Rique’
introspeak 8:58 am on December 19, 2010 Permalink |
Hey Tootsie, Thanks for stopping by my blog.
You write so well. Ah, someone who compliments your every flaw; What a nice feeling it is. Reading it makes me want to go find that lady who can make me forget all my flaws when she jumps into my arms
SeaGlass 1:13 pm on December 19, 2010 Permalink |
There’s a lot being said here, and it’s a brave move to share poetry with other people. What I’d suggest is concentrating on really distilling what you’re saying and trying to work out why your experience of these feelings or emotions is unique to you- why, in effect, is your experience special or different? The goal in poetry should be to reveal something new about human experience. You might consider looking at this subject from the perspective of someone completely different from yourself- someone of the opposite sex, a different cultural background, a different species, even! It’s worth experimenting a little and finding something new and unique to tell other people. Good luck and happy writing!
Roy Smith 2:16 pm on December 19, 2010 Permalink |
sweet and nicely written
dasuntoucha 12:04 am on December 20, 2010 Permalink |
Touching words...felt.
lmcgregor 8:41 pm on December 20, 2010 Permalink |
Fanatastic, Liked the rhyming pattern as well
Leo (Leonnyes) 2:13 pm on December 22, 2010 Permalink |
awesome. one guy worth meeting, eh Tootsie? cool.
gracefulglider 6:46 pm on December 23, 2010 Permalink |
i like the simplicity in this piece…. touching!
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meirozavian 3:57 pm on December 24, 2010 Permalink |
So…so Nice. Love it !!
Outstanding Poetry From Outstanding Poets | Promising Poets' Parking Lot 4:54 am on December 27, 2010 Permalink |
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meirozavian 5:26 am on December 27, 2010 Permalink |
Lovely.
Happy new year!!
Tootsie 4:11 pm on December 27, 2010 Permalink |
Thank you everyone for your kind words..IT REALLY MEANS A LOT
hope you all had an awesome christmas and I will be updating as soon as I get on my comp 
megzone 3:41 pm on January 14, 2011 Permalink |
whooaaa…!!! i simply love this poem
its just brilliant
the last para simply takes the cake
here from Jingle’s Rally.. You can find my poem at
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2011/01/12/i-dance/
Jingle 12:25 am on January 15, 2011 Permalink |
How are you?
Want to make more poetic friends? You have to become a participant and stay active with fellow poets. Join Us Now, it is free and fun!
Please leave your link under my agreement post when you are ready…Poetry Awards are assigned upon completion…Hope to see you in…
Your poetry rocks!
Keep Writing, Happy 2011!
xx
let me know if you wish to take the perfect poet award for week 36, and enter for week 37 poets rally.
best regards.
lunawitch15 9:58 pm on February 21, 2011 Permalink |
I finally got a chance to read some of yours back.
They are awesome!
D 6:25 am on June 10, 2011 Permalink |
God gave u a gift with poetry and no one can ever change that, you should post more poems we miss you.
Tootsie 7:20 pm on June 30, 2011 Permalink |
<3