Potluck week 13- Escape
In my dream
Life is sweet
Sweet as this butterscotch ice cream
People are eccentric just like me
Not hypocrites or judgmental
Going about their life carefree
There is laughter
There is love
Nothing looks bad hereafter
I wish I could live in my dreams
Today, Tonight, Tomorrow
I’m tired of the same regimes
I need an escape from this place
I need an escape to survive
I want to live in my dreams, where I can decide the pace
Where I can change it all in an instant
Let’s escape to this imaginary place
My dreams
This is my entry for the Potluck week 13 on Jingle Poetry
askcherlock 12:53 am on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
Awesome! This sounds like the perfect escape. Maybe we can share your dreams….
Tootsie 12:59 am on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
That would be great
Becky 4:46 am on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
I find my daydreams a comforting and wonderful place for the exact same reasons. If I did not have an imagination, I would not have survived this life of mine.
KB 5:47 am on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
Sounds wonderful.
Tootsie 2:01 am on December 8, 2010 Permalink |
Thank You.
WordsWorthMillions 3:55 pm on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
Aw… Beautiful dream. I will go with you.
‘Sweet as this butterscotch ice cream’ Liked this simile. There is a touch of childlike and innocent.
Tootsie 10:16 pm on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
Thank you
fiveloaf 7:11 pm on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
very dreamy and sweet! mine’s here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
Tootsie 10:17 pm on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
Thanks! I will go read yours right now
Jingle 7:12 pm on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
I wish I could live in my dreams
Today, Tonight, Tomorrow
I’m tired of the same regimes
me feel the same, well done, Glad to see you shine at JP…
A+
Tootsie 10:17 pm on December 7, 2010 Permalink |
Thank you! JP is a great community
Curtis Honeycutt 1:30 am on December 8, 2010 Permalink |
Sign me up…reminds me a bit of the ideal world John Lennon sings about in “Imagine”.
Tootsie 1:32 am on December 8, 2010 Permalink |
I will be looking up those lyrics now
Serene 3:40 am on December 8, 2010 Permalink |
I wish I could live in my dreams too. We are very similar, you and me. My dreams are perfect. He is perfect in them. My family is perfect in them. Life as we know it, is perfect. I too want to live in my dreams forever.
Thanks for this post. It put a smile on my face and reminded of the beautiful dreams I have too.
Serene~
Tootsie 3:46 am on December 8, 2010 Permalink |
The more I read your posts, the more similarities I see. I’m glad it made you smile
carlos zayas 2:08 pm on December 8, 2010 Permalink |
hi it’s so beautiful thanks sister
Tootsie 9:57 pm on December 8, 2010 Permalink |
YW
gracefulglider 8:36 am on December 10, 2010 Permalink |
‘people are eccentric just like me’ i totally digg that line. i love this poem!
Tootsie 12:08 am on December 14, 2010 Permalink |
Thank u
Alethea 4:58 pm on December 10, 2010 Permalink |
I know what you mean…I feel the same quite often.
Beautifully expressed!!
Tootsie 12:04 am on December 14, 2010 Permalink |
Thanks
Talon 12:01 am on December 11, 2010 Permalink |
I enjoyed this so much. The dream world can so often feel so much finer than the day-to-day one and you captured that feeling perfectly.
My potluck: so maybe
Tootsie 12:04 am on December 14, 2010 Permalink |
Thanks. I will check urs out right now
Jamie Dedes, all rights reserved 2:26 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |
You have company on this one … Well considered …
Tootsie 3:31 pm on December 17, 2010 Permalink |